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[05/12] release-notes-4.3: tweaks to existing text

Message ID d4318080dc94fe426323c4505f93617c235d1f6e.1699266393.git.bluelightning@bluelightning.org
State New
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Series [01/12] Remove references to apm in MACHINE_FEATURES | expand

Commit Message

Paul Eggleton Nov. 6, 2023, 10:29 a.m. UTC
A few grammar tweaks.

Signed-off-by: Paul Eggleton <bluelightning@bluelightning.org>
---
 documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

Comments

Michael Opdenacker Nov. 6, 2023, 4:55 p.m. UTC | #1
Hi Paul

On 06.11.23 at 11:29, Paul Eggleton wrote:
> A few grammar tweaks.
>
> Signed-off-by: Paul Eggleton <bluelightning@bluelightning.org>
> ---
>   documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst | 7 ++++---
>   1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst b/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
> index 2f20fcb6946..dd61a9c8e41 100644
> --- a/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
> +++ b/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
> @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ New Features / Enhancements in 4.3
>   
>      -  `ttyrun <https://github.com/ibm-s390-linux/s390-tools>`__, starts
>         ``getty`` programs only when a terminal exists, preventing respawns
> -      through the ``init`` program. This allowed to remove the
> +      through the ``init`` program. This enabled removing the


Oops, I guess it's not the first time I make this mistake.
I show pay extra attention every time I feeling like using the "allow" 
verb :)
https://letlucyedit.wordpress.com/2013/04/03/enable-or-allow-why-you-need-to-get-it-right/

Many thanks!
Michael.
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diff --git a/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst b/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
index 2f20fcb6946..dd61a9c8e41 100644
--- a/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
+++ b/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@  New Features / Enhancements in 4.3
 
    -  `ttyrun <https://github.com/ibm-s390-linux/s390-tools>`__, starts
       ``getty`` programs only when a terminal exists, preventing respawns
-      through the ``init`` program. This allowed to remove the
+      through the ``init`` program. This enabled removing the
       ``SERIAL_CONSOLES_CHECK`` variable.
 
 -  New classes:
@@ -180,7 +180,8 @@  New Features / Enhancements in 4.3
 
 -  Packaging changes:
 
-   -  :term:`FILES` now accepts ``**``, which matches zero or more subdirectories.
+   -  :term:`FILES` now accepts a ``**`` wildcard, which matches zero or more
+      subdirectories.
 
    -  The X server packagegroup now defaults to using the ``modesetting`` X
       driver, which obsoletes the ``fbdev`` driver.
@@ -208,7 +209,7 @@  New Features / Enhancements in 4.3
    -  New :doc:`../dev-manual/security-subjects` chapter in the Development
       Tasks Manual.
 
-   -  Long due documentation for the :ref:`ref-classes-devicetree` class.
+   -  Long overdue documentation for the :ref:`ref-classes-devicetree` class.
 
    -  New :ref:`summary about available init systems
       <dev-manual/init-manager:summary>`.