ref-manual: minor rewording in chapter 1
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<para>
Welcome to the Yocto Project Reference Manual!
This manual provides reference information for the current release
- of the Yocto Project.
- The manual is best used after you have an understanding
+ of the Yocto Project, and
+ is most effectively used after you have an understanding
of the basics of the Yocto Project.
The manual is neither meant to be read as a starting point to the
- Yocto Project nor read from start to finish.
- Use this manual to find variable definitions, class
+ Yocto Project, nor read from start to finish.
+ Rather, use this manual to find variable definitions, class
descriptions, and so forth as needed during the course of using
the Yocto Project.
</para>
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
<para>
The list of packages you need on the host development system can
be large when covering all build scenarios using the Yocto Project.
- This section provides required packages according to
+ This section describes required packages according to
Linux distribution and function.
</para>
Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@crashcourse.ca> ---