Patchwork [Documentation,RFC,3/3] RN: Add the Release Schedule section

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Submitter Daiane Angolini
Date June 11, 2014, 5:38 p.m.
Message ID <1402508298-5176-3-git-send-email-daiane.angolini@freescale.com>
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Permalink /patch/73613/
State Changes Requested
Delegated to: Otavio Salvador
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Daiane Angolini - June 11, 2014, 5:38 p.m.
Say it is based on Yocto Project.

Please comment on how to point to YP URL.

Signed-off-by: Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini@freescale.com>
---
 release-notes/source/introduction.rst | 10 ++++++++++
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)
Mario Domenech Goulart - June 11, 2014, 6:02 p.m.
Hi Daiane,

On Wed, 11 Jun 2014 14:38:18 -0300 Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini@freescale.com> wrote:

> Say it is based on Yocto Project.
>
> Please comment on how to point to YP URL.
>
> Signed-off-by: Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini@freescale.com>
> ---
>  release-notes/source/introduction.rst | 10 ++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/release-notes/source/introduction.rst b/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
> index a81fc7d..68015aa 100644
> --- a/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
> +++ b/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
> @@ -4,3 +4,13 @@ Introduction
>  This document has the release notes of the FSL Community BSP |release|
>  which is a communty effort to improve Freescale's
>  processors support in OpenEmbedded and in the Yocto Project.
> +
> +Release Schedule
> +----------------
> +
> +The FSL Communtiy BSP follows the same release schedule from Yocto Project.

I suggest

  The FSL Community BSP follows the same release schedule as
  the Yocto Project's.

If you don't agree with the suggestion, please, note the
s/Communtiy/Community/ typo fix.

> +Since Yocto Project release 1.3 (denzil) meta-fsl-arm, meta-fsl-demos and meta-fsl-arm-extra
> +follow the same *release schedule* and the same *branch naming* from Yocto Project.

s/Yocto Project/the Yocto Project/

> +
> +See the `Yocto Projec Release <https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/Releases>`_, for details
> +on the Yocto Project.

I suggest 

  See the `Yocto Project Releases <https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/Releases>`_ document
  for details on the Yocto Project.

(note s/Projec Release/Project Releases/)

I don't know what the `_' character is for in that sentence. I assume it
is a rst syntax, so I've kept it.  If it is noise, please consider
removing it.

Mario
Daiane Angolini - June 18, 2014, 6:16 p.m.
> I don't know what the `_' character is for in that sentence. I assume it
> is a rst syntax, so I've kept it.  If it is noise, please consider
> removing it.

Hi Mario, thanks a lot for your suggestions.

I have fixed/updated the patches.

Lou, I have uploaded the patches on my personal github, this way we
can rework then before merging into the original project.

https://github.com/angolini/Documentation

Regards,
Daiane

Patch

diff --git a/release-notes/source/introduction.rst b/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
index a81fc7d..68015aa 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
@@ -4,3 +4,13 @@  Introduction
 This document has the release notes of the FSL Community BSP |release|
 which is a communty effort to improve Freescale's
 processors support in OpenEmbedded and in the Yocto Project.
+
+Release Schedule
+----------------
+
+The FSL Communtiy BSP follows the same release schedule from Yocto Project.
+Since Yocto Project release 1.3 (denzil) meta-fsl-arm, meta-fsl-demos and meta-fsl-arm-extra
+follow the same *release schedule* and the same *branch naming* from Yocto Project.
+
+See the `Yocto Projec Release <https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/Releases>`_, for details
+on the Yocto Project.